Room 613 Student Blogs - 2005/2006

June 20, 2006

When You Left

Filed under: Poetry, SarahD, 6H —— sarahd6h @ 10:24 am

When You Left
by Sarah D.

I’m lying in bed
Your voice is in my head
Can’t get you out of my mind
You were so friendly so kind
All the good times we had
Until we got really mad
Things have changed since you went away

My heart is empty
Everythings a blurr
I wish things were back to how they were
Things have changed since you went away

Everythings quiet
I don’t know what to do
All I can say is that I really miss you
Things have changed since you went away

Everythings different
Everythings changed
And now that your gone things won’t be the same
Things have changed since you went away

5 Responses to “When You Left”

  1.   Mr. Hetherington Says:

    I’m speechless Sarah. An incredibly beautiful and touching poem. Thank you for sharing it with the class and the world.
    Mr. Hetherington

  2.   sarah Says:

    Sarah,
    I think this poem is very nice.
    I wish it would end with more happiness though.
    Did you find this poem or write it?
    Sara

  3.   mayak6h Says:

    Hey Sarah! This is really touching. It almost brought tears to my eyes.
    I was wondering though if you wrote it a bout someone special that left you,
    or was it just a poem? Great job!
    Maya

  4.   John Says:

    Hi Sarah,
    A lovely lost poem, thank you for blogging it. It is almost as if I can hear you singing it.

  5.   Ana Says:

    That poem you wrote was very good and I’m sure who ever Went away was a good person to be reconized like this.

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