Room 613 Student Blogs - 2005/2006

January 30, 2006

Roof Collapses in Poland

Filed under: Newsbreak - Week 2, 6L Newsbreak, International Newsbreak, OmayiaD, 6L —— omyiad @ 9:03 pm

Imagine this, you’re in an exhibition hall in Poland and there is snow on the roof. Suddenly, because of the weight of 1 foot of snow, the roof collapses and you’re buried under metal and snow. Well, that is exactly what happened to about 500 people on Saturday in Katowice, Poland. Somewhere around 160 people are injured and 62 are confirmed dead. Of the 59 corpses that have been identified, 7 were foreigners. A search for bodies using dogs trained to find corpses failed and officials have basically given up hope for finding more survivors. A new law is being discussed that will compel large building owners to remove ice and snow from their roofs. Prime Minister Kazimierz Marcinkiewica states that “The changes in the law will be based on raising penalties, including the closure of buildings whose roofs are not cleared of ice or snow.” I think that the new law should go thorough in order to keep people safe. Don’t you?

For more information, go to http://www.guardian.co.uk/worldlatest/story/0,,-5581549,00.html

6 Responses to “Roof Collapses in Poland”

  1.   meghanm Says:

    Omyia,
    Great job on your story! You really getting into the story with your detail.

    This is quite interesting for me because I am polish. Great job writing and

    keep up the good work!

  2.   katarinaq Says:

    Omyia,
    I liked the way you started you paragraph.
    You did a great job on your details!
    You made this topic sound very interesting!
    Great job!

  3.   Ryan J Says:

    I personally think that it’s great that a brand new student to our school is already geting into the big stuff. Keep it up Omayia!

  4.   leec Says:

    Nice picture.

  5.   emilym Says:

    I love how you explained the story. It had great detail although it’s sad that many people
    died in the accident.The thing I loved most about your article was that you had us
    imagine what happened instead of just telling us first. It made me feel like I was in the
    situation too!Keep writing as well as you did and good job! :o)

  6.   elianaf Says:

    Omayia,I really liked the way you discribed this story with such vivid
    details! My favorite thing about your story is that you made it unique
    by adding in the law that you think should be added. Also, the picture
    that you put in made the reader think about how much damage a foot
    of snow can cause. Great work, I can’t wait until your next post!!

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